"We’re sorry!" - How to create apology emails

Wednesday, March 23, 2011

The day after the tragic earthquake in Christchurch, Expedia made the epic blunder of emailing its Australian database to promote cheap holidays in New Zealand, and illustrated the offer with a large image of Christchurch Cathedral’s spire, which was of course destroyed in the quake.

A sincere apology was delivered to the same subscriber group from the General Manager of Expedia Australia and New Zealand the following day.

Subject line: Hurry! New Zealand 72hr Sale Ends Soon

Subject line: Apologies from Expedia

Apology emails are never an easy campaign to pull together. However it is an effective way to quickly, correct a mistake in an earlier communication or apologise for any disruptive online or offline issues. And on a positive note apology emails can actually turn out to be some of the best performing campaigns due to the cut through they create.

So what makes a good apology email?

  • Speed – send the apology as quickly as possible, but do take the time to make sure there are no issues or mistakes with the content!
  • Make it clear you are apologising in the subject line – creating the vital cut through mentioned above.
  • Guys give flowers, companies give free shipping, discounts, etc – an offer is generally not required with apologies to communication mistakes, more with downtime to a site or anything that has been detrimental to your customers.
  • Use humour appropriately – this may be appropriate with minor mistakes, however with sensitive issues such as Expedia’s faux pas, humour is not recommended.
  • Sign off from an Executive when apologising for any major issues.

Other examples:

Subject line: We’re So Sorry!

Subject line: Email Error – Duplicate Send

Subject line: A message to all our customers

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